My teacher has emailed me feedback on my first draft of my auxiliary products, and this is what she suggested I change.
Poster
Girl in background – cut out needs work.
If you’re using stripes (like camera footage) then need to think about how this is displayed on poster (look at Paranormal Activity posters).
Credit block needs work – needs to be more complex, smaller, not on black background.
Tagline font is a bit bland.
Title – make bigger?
Magazine
Something strange happening with ‘biggest movie magazine’ text at top.
Think the chairs would work better on the magazine front over – you could use green/blue fonts and similar style of lined effect as poster.
This years’ best horror – punctuation issue.
Empire – needs to spread across page equally.
Price and date is out of line.
Unfinished.
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