Pitch Feedback

We did our pitch to our class and received feedback from them. It was said that we created a good sense of the plot and the idea was good, however music needs to be added to create more of an impact. This is something we need to consider very soon as if we struggle to find music now, it may be an issue when creating our trailer. We should also have included a clear target audience, because while it was hinted at it was not said clearly.